This story is my entry to Susanna Lenard Hill's Halloweensie Contest.
The challenge is to write a story in 100 words or fewer including a few key words. If you want to enter too, check out the information here.
Hide and Go Shriek (Word count = 99)
Rune crept,
masked by shadows,
into dusk-lit woods.
The gong sounded.
Halloween Hide-and-go-Seek
had begun.
She slipped into
a musky cave
under a gnarled maple tree.
Something snapped.
She looked down.
A skeleton,
all jumbled bones,
shone,
ghost-like.
Empty eyes
of a long dead creature
glared
above pointy teeth.
Rune shrank back,
shivered,
then grinned,
mischievously.
She placed the skull
onto a stick
and spiked it
outside her hiding place.
She waited.
Footsteps came
closer…
closer…
closer…
She tensed.
She made the skull quiver,
then growled.
The seeker shrieked
and fled!
Rune,
skull stick in hand
set off seeking...
If you have explored in the Pacific Northwest, you might know that we have enormous Bigleaf Maple trees. When these trees are about 75 years old, their middles can start to rot, creating these spooky and exciting spaces.
Would you hide in there?
You can tell a lot about an animal from its skull. Can you guess what kind of skull Rune found in the story?
There aren't a lot of clues. We don't know how big it is or what shape it is, but we do know it has pointy teeth and the eyes looked straight at Rune, meaning they were most likely in the front of its skull - perfect for hunting. That means that it is probably a carnivore (meat eater).
Some possibilities are:
Fox
Coyote
Raccoon
Bobcat
Bear
Skunk
Weasel
Opossum
Which do you think is the spookiest? (If you want to check out some skull photos, click here.)
You can read more about carnivores in Washington here.
Beautifully written mystery, Natasha! I totally would've crawled in there as a kid. Good luck with the contest.
You set a great creepy, Halloween feel. Good job and good luck!
This great, I love the tone and the voice of this piece. Great suspence!
Thanks for including the great picture of the tree! Super spooky place to be hiding on Halloween night!
I love the story. I was there in the woods. Your nature theme and descriptions of the Northwest are wonderful and creepy. I have a couple skulls on my shelf. Bwhahahaha!A racoon found on a hike with my husband, and a grey fox gifted to me by a friend I met at Highlights Foundation.